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提要
申请者概况
女性，二十七八岁。工作好几年，全自费去美国读MBA
拒签理由
自费的金钱问题以及移民倾向
申诉重点
解释自己在美国公司工作的背景清洗自己的专业资格和金钱来源这个两个主要问题解释爸爸为美国公司工作的专家和身份问题同样也是清洗自己的赴美学习目的，是为了更高层次的追求，而不是其它去美国读书，是有钱的中国家庭为了子女前途的一个传统进一步加强自己“自费”留学的可信度
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原文
Dear Visa Officer ,
My dream for an American MBA degree was shattered three times when my application for a student visa was rejected three times by your visa officers. I believe that the refusals are not reasonable because I have a solid plan for my study in the United States and return to China to develop my future, where I am making a great living at this present. Please allow me to show why your rejection to my visa is unfair to me:
1. Having worked for an American company, Mellon Central Air Conditioning Co. of its China venture for more than two years as the first marketing assistant to the Director of Marketing Department, I have not only achieved great experience in American style marketing and sales, but also accumulated enough money to be invested into a valued American MBA. Money is not a problem for me but an MBA is critical to my better life in China a few years later. It is this company from the United States who has given me strong experience of business and sufficient financial rewards, an MBA from an American school is a logical decoration to my already fulfilling career. I would be very much appreciate it if you grant me a visa to realize this dream of mine, a dream I can financially afford, professionally deserve.
2.My father, a national famous expert in power industry as well as the co-sponsor for my American MBA project, is the president of the Chinese joint-venture of Mellon Central Air Conditioning Co. of America, the world leader in cooling system industry and the largest in the United States of its business. My father is also the general manager of another American company’s Chinese operation, Beijing Air Conditioning Tech. Co., Ltd. He has made a good fortune during the last few years working in these American companies after he was granted an early retirement from his senior positions at some major state-owned corporations. Like father, Like daughter. If my father can be this big even without an American education, what could I possibly achieve after I receive my MBA degree from the United States? Please do not deny my great future in China by denying me the student visa to my American MBA. My father is the living example as why I will return to China! Accusing me has the intention to stay in your country is the ignorance to my unique situation in which I have been working for this American company for about three years and my father is leading the operations of two companies from the United States!
3. Everybody knows that MBAs in the United States can not find a job, except for those from top twenty schools. The University of Wyoming is ranked number 70 for its MBA program. However, an American MBA degree is the golden key in China to young people’s future because of China’s economic situation where hundreds of thousands of MBAs are urgently needed. Taking into consideration to my strong credential as well as to my father’s great success in Chinese society you will believe that I am among those who would definitely return to China for the great China gold rush in the next century!
On basis of my previous argument, I sincerely hope that you will reconsider my application and grant me the student visa. I appreciate your job duty to prevent bad people from coming to the United States as well as to allow the eligible person coming to your country for American education. It has been the great tradition for well-off Chinese families to send their children to the United States for American education. My application is only one of the exercises of this tradition.
Thank you very much for your reconsideration.
Sincerely,
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